Wednesday, 13 February 2013

First Draft of my Music Video:




This is the first draft of my music video, but I have not finished editing the end and plan to film more. I hope to receive some audience feedback, but ask that they take into consideration that it is only the start and middle that I have fully edited. It is open for suggestions and improvements :)
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  1. Katie Carter27 February 2013 at 01:29

    I really like your style of editing and the camera use as it looks very professional. However I'm not really sure on the ending as it looks all jumbled together.

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  2. Caroline Birks27 February 2013 at 01:34

    You have created a very 'moody' video but perhaps it is a bit miserable? It would be good to finish on a positive note. I'm not sure the storyline is completely obvious? Also, I think you should think about performance, as it would break up the narrative a bit. A good first edit.

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  3. nellytookey27 February 2013 at 01:44

    i really like your first draft, however i believe it would be beneficial for you to make a clearer link between her and who she is missing - maybe some pictures or flashbacks of him :) wonderful other than that though

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